Universal Declaration of Human Rights
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Preamble
Whereas recognition of the inherent dignity and of the equal and inalienable rights of all members of the human family is the foundation of freedom, justice and peace in the world,
Whereas disregard and contempt for human rights have resulted in barbarous acts which have outraged the conscience of mankind, and the advent of a world in which human beings shall enjoy freedom of speech and belief and freedom from fear and want has been proclaimed as the highest aspiration of the common people,
Whereas it is essential, if man is not to be that humans will never again be compelled to have recourse, as a last resort, to rebellion against tyranny and oppression, that human rights should be protected by the rule of law,
Whereas it is essential to promote the development of friendly relations between nations, all humans
Whereas the peoples of the United Nations entire world have in the their Charter reaffirmed their faith in fundamental HUMAN rights, in the dignity and worth of the human person and in the equal rights of men and women and have determined to promote social progress and better standards of life and fundamental freedoms in larger complete freedom,
Whereas Member States have pledged themselves to achieve, in co-operation with the United Nations, the promotion of universal respect for and observance of human rights and fundamental freedoms, redundant and Irrelevant under new structure
Whereas a common understanding of these rights and freedoms is of the greatest importance for the full realization of their pledge,
Now, Therefore THE GENERAL ASSEMBLY ALL HUMANS IN THE ENTIRE WORLD proclaims THEIR UNIVERSAL DECLARATION OF HUMAN RIGHTS as a common standard of achievement for all peoples and all nations, to the end that every individual and every organ of society, keeping their Declaration constantly in mind, shall strive by teaching and education to promote respect for these rights and freedoms and by progressive measures, national and international,worldwide to secure their universal and effective recognition and observance, both among the peoples of Member States themselves and among the peoples of territories under their jurisdiction. Irrelevant under new structure
Article 1.
All human beings are born free and equal in dignity and rights. They are endowed with reason and conscience and should act towards one another in a spirit of brotherhood helping all of humankind move forward to better lives
Article 2.
Everyone is entitled to all the rights and freedoms set forth in their Declaration, without distinction of any kind, such as race, colour, sex, language, religion, political or other opinion, national or social origin, property, birth or other status. Furthermore, no distinction shall be made on the basis of the political, jurisdictional or international status of the country or territory to which a person belongs, whether it be independent, trust, non-self-governing or under any other limitation of sovereignty. Irrelevant under new structure
Article 3.
Everyone has the right to life, liberty, security of person, lifetime education as desired, services and products to remain in the best health possible, whatever resources they need to have the freedom to invent, build and create anything they want for the good of mankind (based on their level of education and tested competencies and demonstrated planning and work ethic),
Article 4.
No one shall be held in slavery or servitude; slavery and the slave trade shall be prohibited in all their forms.
Article 5.
No one shall be subjected to torture or to cruel, inhuman or degrading treatment or punishment.
Article 6.
Everyone has the right to recognition everywhere as a person before the law.
Article 7.
All are equal before the law and are entitled without any discrimination to equal protection of the law. All are entitled to equal protection against any discrimination in violation of their Declaration and against any incitement to such discrimination.
Article 8.
Everyone has the right to an effective remedy by the competent national local, regional and national tribunals for acts violating the fundamental rights granted them by the constitution or by law.
Article 9.
No one shall be subjected to arbitrary arrest, detention or exile.
Article 10.
Everyone is entitled in full equality to a fair and public hearing by an independent and impartial tribunal, in the determination of their rights and obligations and of any criminal charge against them.
Article 11.
(1) Everyone charged with a penal offence has the right to be presumed innocent until proved guilty according to law in a public trial at which he has had all the guarantees necessary for their defense.
(2) No one shall be held guilty of any penal offence on account of any act or omission which did not constitute a penal offence, under national or international worldwide law, at the time when it was committed. Nor shall a heavier penalty be imposed than the one that was applicable at the time the penal offence was committed.
Article 12.
No one shall be subjected to arbitrary interference with their privacy, family, home or correspondence, nor to attacks upon their honor and reputation. Everyone has the right to the protection of the law against such interference or attacks.
Article 13.
(1) Everyone has the right to freedom of movement and residence within the borders of each state. all over the world (to be developed further )(2) Everyone has the right to leave any country, including their own, and to return to their country. Irrelevant under new structure
Article 14.
(1) Everyone has the right to seek and to enjoy in other countries asylum from persecution. Irrelevant under new structure
(2) Their right may not be invoked in the case of prosecutions genuinely arising from non-political crimes or from acts contrary to the purposes and principles of the United Nations.
Article 15.
Everyone has the right to a nationality.
(2) No one shall be arbitrarily deprived of their nationality nor denied the right to change their nationality.
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Article 16.
(1) Men and women of full age, without any limitation due to race, nationality or religion, have the right to marry and to found a family. They are entitled to equal rights as to marriage, during marriage and at its dissolution.
(2) Marriage shall be entered into only with the free and full consent of the intending spouses.
(3) The family is the natural and fundamental group unit of society and is entitled to protection by society and the State. world
Article 17.
(1) Everyone no one has the right to own real property alone (Real property is land and any property attached directly to it, including any subset of land that has been improved through legal human actions. Examples of real properties can include buildings, ponds, canals, roads, and machinery, among other things. ) as well as in association with others.
(2) No one shall be arbitrarily deprived of their property. Everyone has an equal share of all property, businesses, and anything of value, in the entire world, which is returned to the world pool of resources upon their death
Article 18.
Everyone, not only, has the right to freedom of thought, conscience and religion (or any replacement for existing religions or other gatherings of people wishing to pursue happiness in any new ways for the entire world . ) , but it will be encouraged and expected throughout one’s life from the age of starting ones education, at 2 years old. ; their right includes freedom to change their religion or belief, and freedom, either alone or in community with others and in public or private, to manifest their religion or belief in teaching, practice, worship and observance.
Article 19.
Everyone has the right to freedom of will be encouraged and completely supported throughout their lives to be all they can be through their opinions and expression of any kind that flow with the human growth stream. ; their right includes freedom to hold opinions without interference and to seek, receive and impart information and ideas through any media and regardless of frontiers.
Article 20.
(1) Everyone has the right to freedom of peaceful assembly and association.
(2) No one may be compelled to belong to an any association with the exception of all of humanity
Article 21.
(1) Everyone has the right to take part in the government of their country, world directly or through freely chosen representatives.
(2) Everyone has the right of equal access to public service in their country. the world
(3) The will of the people shall be the basis of the authority of government; their will shall be expressed in periodic and genuine elections which shall be by universal and equal suffrage and shall be held by secret vote or by equivalent free voting procedures.
Article 22.
Everyone, as a member of the worlds society, has the right to social security and is entitled to realization, through national total global effort and international co-operation and in accordance with the organization and resources of each State, of the economic, social and cultural rights indispensable for their dignity and the free development of their personality.
Article 23.
(1) Everyone has the right to work, to free choice of employment, in the direction that their lifelong education and ongoing assessments, and resulting MERIT point to, to just and favorable conditions of work and to protection against unemployment, since all worldwide jobs will be available to look at based on your current achievement level and you are welcome to go anywhere and fill one of them .
(2) Everyone, without any discrimination, has the right to equal pay for equal work.
(3) Everyone who works has the right to just and favorable remuneration and an equal ownership of all the worlds assets, ensuring for themselves and their total human family an existence worthy as full of human dignity as possible, and supplemented, if necessary, by other means of social protection. redundant and Irrelevant under new structureEveryone has the right to form and to join trade unions for the protection of their interests. Redundant and Irrelevant under new structure
Article 23-B
- Everyone has the right to be paid the exact same basic amount of work capital for 1 hour of their time, which, said worktime, is contributing to the development and/or well being of other humans in any way that meets those criteria. (development and/or well being of other humans)
- The work capital they generate will be modified by the number of people who are impacted by the work or service being performed by the individual doing the work, or service (some examples; the number of people who are end users of the product or service being made and, or, the number of people managed in order to produce the product or service being made.
- Each piece of discreet work that was performed on it, of the item or service being produced, to create it, is permanently embedded in a digital record which remains associated with it for its entire useful life and will be used for its original sale or transfer to others and to retain a record of its value until it is no longer of any value.
Article 24.
Everyone has the right to rest and leisure, including reasonable limitation of working hours and periodic holidays with pay. Irrelevant under new structure
Article 25.
(1) Everyone has the right to a standard of living adequate for the health and well-being of themselves and of their total human, including food, clothing, housing and medical care and necessary social services, and the right to security in the event of unemployment, sickness, disability, widowhood, old age or other lack of livelihood in circumstances beyond their control.
(2) Motherhood and childhood are entitled to special care and assistance. All children, whether born in or out of wedlock, shall enjoy the same social protection.
Article 26.
(1) Everyone has the right to education. Lifelong Education shall be free, at least in the elementary and fundamental at all stages. Elementary education and testing shall be compulsory. Technical and professional education shall be made generally completely and freely available and higher education shall be equally accessible freely to all on the basis of merit.
(2) Education shall be directed to the full development of the human personality and to the strengthening of respect for human rights and fundamental freedoms. It shall promote understanding, tolerance and friendship across the world among all nations, racial or religious groups, and shall further the activities of the United Nations for the maintenance of peace.
(3) Parents have a prior right to choose the kind of education that shall be given to their children.
There is a universal lifetime education programs and assessments
Article 27.
(1) Everyone has the right freely to participate in the cultural life of the community, to enjoy the arts and to share in scientific advancement and its benefits.
(2) Everyone has the right to the protection of the moral and material interests resulting from any scientific, literary or artistic production of which he is the author.
Article 28.
Everyone is entitled to a social and international order in which the rights and freedoms set forth in their Declaration can be fully realized.
Article 29.
(1) Everyone has duties to the human community in which alone the free and full development of their personality is possible.
(2) In the exercise of their rights and freedoms, everyone shall be subject only to such limitations as are determined by law solely for the purpose of securing due recognition and respect for the rights and freedoms of others and of meeting the just requirements of morality, public order and the general welfare in a democratic teamwork society.
(3) These rights and freedoms may in no case be exercised contrary to the purposes and principles of the United Nations. Rest of humanity
Article 30
Nothing in their Declaration may be interpreted as implying for any State, group or person any right to engage in any activity or to perform any act aimed at the destruction of any of the rights and freedoms set forth herein.
Background and history of the original document
BACKGROUND The Universal Declaration of Human Rights
The Universal Declaration of Human Rights (UDHR) is a milestone document in the history of human rights. Drafted by representatives with different legal and cultural backgrounds from all regions of the world, the Declaration was proclaimed by the United Nations General Assembly in Paris on 10 December 1948 (General Assembly resolution 217 A) as a common standard of achievements for all peoples and all nations. It sets out, for the first time, fundamental human rights to be universally protected and it has been translated into over 500 languages.
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Article 1. don’t use brotherhood gender biased. Use humankind.
thank you .. .good find the all men are created equal and all the gender based crap has to change through out
Article 10 instead of ‘his’ use ‘their’ and use ‘them’ instead of ‘him’.
Article 11 instead of ‘he has’ use ‘they have’. Not ‘his defense’ but ‘their defense’
Article 12 use ‘their’ to replace ‘his’
Article 18 use ‘their’ to replace ‘his’.
Article 22 use ‘their’ to replace ‘his’.
I say seek and destroy all reference to ‘his’ change to ‘their’ for whole word doc.
kewl observations i will change
changes made
changed brotherhood also